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... After I go in the first hot spring, there is another room with another hot spring. This onsen …
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After I go in the first hot spring, there is another room with another hot spring. This onsen is lighted in blue and it makes you feel like you are in the Atlantis. Under me, there are fishes and sharks swimming in a tank. These fishes are colorful, so it is like you are deep in the ocean. Then, there is the Rome onsen. This onsen is bright and colored in all gold. There are some statues in here too. In the onsen of Medditerian sea, house that is built a place to lie down to rest. I like this place, because I can relax underthe settig sun. The greek onsen is beautiful, it has blue lights all over. There is an herbal house, where the of the Erechtheion linger. Stars twinkle in the celing too. In Finland,there is a sauna house which is built in the two-thousand old style. Finally the next onsen is inspired by Italy`sthe famous Grotta Azzura, the Blue Grotto off the coast of Capri. There are also red, green, and white baths.
So, you can have fun with all the sights in the onsen. There are Asian zone too. If you want to relax, this place is confortable!
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descriptive essay
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Kourakuen (ramen shop)
... lunch time.
The shop assistant greets us, and they tell us where …
Kourakuen (ramen shop)
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lunch time.
The shop assistant greets us, and they tell us where to sit. As soon as I sit, I can here the cook making ramen. The seats in this shop are as comfortable as an expensive sofa.The re is some pictures on the wall, and the bright light always welcomes us.
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stomach grumble.
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come here.
This ramen is the best shop than the other restaurants that I have been to. I think everyone will want to come here again when they eat this ramen. So, I hope that this shop does not close down, I will be so sad! I am looking forward to go to this shop again.
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Steel Dragon
My friend Naho, and I ran towards the entrance of the roller coaster ride called Ste…
Steel Dragon
My friend Naho, and I ran towards the entrance of the roller coaster ride called Steel Dragon. We walked up the stairs, and lined up in the line. When it was our turn to go on,we tried to go to the front seat,or the back seat. These seats are exciting than the other. We sat in the seats, put on our seatbelts, and pulled the safety bar down. Suddenly, the coaster moved, we were so excioted. Soon, it went towards the sky, we could barely see the people under us. The roller coaster went down so fast like a rocket. The ride continued for over two minutes. At the last part, there was a camera. It flashed right into our eyes. When it was over, we were laughing at our photos that was taken during the ride. As usual, Naho said "Lets go on again!" so we went running towards the entrance hoping that we could go on the front seat again.
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Describing a Famous Place
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Ikuta Shrine
The first thing you see when you go into the Ikuta Shrine is the bright red torri.…
Ikuta Shrine
The first thing you see when you go into the Ikuta Shrine is the bright red torri. Torri is a gate which is in front of a shrine.This torri makes you feel like it is welcoming you in. The nature in this shrine is very gorgeous. The service ladies are the Shinto is very nice too.
Ikuta Shrine is located in Sannomiya, Kobe and it was founded in the third century. This place is quiet and you can calm down here. You can hear the bell of the shrine, and hear the money being put into the box. There is a statue of a dog in front of the shrine. Many Japanese people say that if you are bad, the statue moves to get you. Around the pond, there are beautiful maple trees. The colorful leaves, flowers, the kerrias, and the double flowering cherry trees, make the river look very nice. They surround the pond nicely. The bamboo trees are planted farther in the back where you can sit and look at its beautiful leaves. From the bridge there is a great view of the pond and the trees.
Describing a Famous Place
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Ikuta Shrine
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This shrine is a good place to go when you are tired. It is enjoyable and the beautiful sights make you feel very nice and comforting.
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Describing a Famous Place
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Ikuta Shrine
The first sight when you go into the Ikuta Shrine is the bright red torri. This…
Ikuta Shrine
The first sight when you go into the Ikuta Shrine is the bright red torri. This torri makes you feel like it is welcoming you in. The nature in this shrine is very gorgeous. The maiden in the Shinto is very nice too.
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the shrine. Many Japanese people say that if you are bad, the statue moves to get you. Around the
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colorful leaves, flowers, the kerrias,
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They surround itthe pond nicely. The
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the trees.
It is an old and traditional shrine with a history of Kobe's protective god. Also you can get a lot of power from the beautiful sights. The people in this shrine believe that there is a got in everything like stone, trees, and flowers etc. You can sit in the seat on the back when the Shinto priest is praying. When the prayer finishes, he blesses the people on the back. Also there can be a wedding in this place or a festival. There was one idol and an entertainer who did a wedding in this shrine. When there is a festival, the whole shrine is lit up in bright red lights. There are numerous booths selling foods and other materials. It is quite famous in those area, so many people come to enjoy. This place used for many proposes so when I go there, there is sometimes a festival happening.
Describing a Famous Place
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Ikuta Shrine
The first sight when you go into the Ikuta Shrine is the bright red torri. This tor…
Ikuta Shrine
The first sight when you go into the Ikuta Shrine is the bright red torri. This torri makes you feel like it is welcoming you in. The nature in this shrine is very gorgeous. The maiden in the Shinto is very nice too.
Ikuta Shrine is located in Sannomiya, Kobe and it was found in the third century. This place is quiet and you can calm down. You can hear the bell of the shrine, and hear the money being put into the box. There is a statue of a dog in front of the shrine. Around the pond, there are the beautiful maple trees. The colorful leaves, the kerrias, and the double flowering cherry trees, makes the river look very nice. They surround it nicely. The bamboo trees are planted farther in the back where you can sit and look at its beautiful leaves. From the bridge there is a great view of the pond and the trees.
It is an old and traditional shrine with a history of Kobe's protective god. Also you can get a lot of power from the beautiful sights. The people in this shrine believe that there is a got in everything like stone, trees, and flowers etc. You can sit in the seat on the back when the Shinto priest is praying. When the prayer finishes, he blesses the people on the back. Also there can be a wedding in this place or a festival. There was one idol and an entertainer who did a wedding in this shrine. When there is a festival, the whole shrine is lit up in bright red lights. There are numerous booths selling foods and other materials. It is quite famous in those area, so many people come to enjoy. This place used for many proposes so when I go there, there is sometimes a festival happening.
This shrine is a good place to go when you are tired. It isenjoyable and the beautiful sights make you feel very nice and comforting.
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“Start!” said the teacher loudly.
The noisy classroom became soundless in one second. Everyone ope…
“Start!” said the teacher loudly.
The noisy classroom became soundless in one second. Everyone opened the booklet of the math test. The sound of everyone’s pencil moving filled the classroom. I also opened the booklet and started answering the questions. The air was filled with nervousness.
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“I had done these kinds of questions before.” I whispered softly.
“Twenty minutes more!” the teacher explained.
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the entire question.exam. Luckily I
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first in overamongst two hundred
“I can’t believe it!” I said it surprisingly.